Wednesday, February 11, 2004
crescendo
ok, so i am in need of a climax................i cannot think of what a realistic restaurant climax would be............fire, water, gas leak/explosion..........none of these sound like anywhere i want to go.................maybe the climax needs to be something in gail's life............a marriage proposal/job opportunity..........or maybe our lottery win puts the future in question...i lie awake at night thinking about how i want this story line to go.......now that i have centered on the white/black aspects.........i cannot think of a climax that both gail and i would repect in the morning...so to speak..............is an effective climax supposed to be a choice, a catasprophe.....a turning point......maybe a bad health department inspection......or a drug bust with all of our night employees secretly selling cocaine beneath our radar...................i cannot decide................maybe hemingway would just have another plate of oysters and a bottle of dry white sancerre........and eventually the solution would come to him...............
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